Ramjet-The Brash Warrior of Cybertron

No offense but I personally don't like the idea of having Transformers in a DBZ Role Playing Game.

Even though I love Transformer's to death, and the thought of one day Goku teaming up with Optimus Prime in a hilarious spoof, it just doesn't seem right. Giant robots and DBZ just don't mix.

I think it's an interesting idea to have transformers and DBZ together. However, your character is so strong that it would be unfair to everyone else who is playing. If you want to do this, your going to have to make your character weaker and allow for character development.

So, if you don't want to change anything, it might be a while before the admins approve your character.

All new RP'ers must have characters with power levels no higher than 5,000.

Which compared to an average citizen is hellishly strong - just look at Nappa.

Alright then, you use too many capital letters on words that don't need capitalizing.

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Personality: Has a Big Ego and loves to make his enemies fear him (in the "How crazy is that guy" sense) but has a moral sense of right and wrong/code of honor.

Need to give more info on personality, sure he has a big ego but what fuels it...


Personally your character is interesting, However your character is too strong if he's got so much firepower, why join the rebellion? Also I can't see a giant robot battling in space against Frieza or anyone else in DBZ.

I'm very sorry, especially as it looks like you've put a fair bit of effort into creating your bio, but this RPG does not accept crossover characters under any circumstances. This is not to say that there are no positive aspects about your character application, but we can't accept a transformer into the game. I'm afraid it just doesn't fit into the overall storyline/game.

There are some aspects I do really like about your character's overall personality, however. For example his catchphrase is gold! Your grammar/spelling isn't too bad, but there are enough mistakes to make me worry how you would fair in the game. You would seriously need to work on your writing in order to be accepted into the RPG. For example, you use capital letters for random words mid sentence e.g. "At least Ramjet would have a Straightforward plan." Straightforward should not have a capital letter here.

While we cannot accept your character application this time around, it does not mean you can't try again. Ramjet has an interesting personality - he just needs a bit of work and to fit into the DBZ universe more. Perhaps you could make him a Saiyan, human or Ice-jin, for example? In any case, don't take it to heart - most of the players here have spent a great deal of time developing their character for the DOF game.